hello there the following im posting here is what i would like to be changed please have it in mind, this is my second and last attemt so please i am waiting a piese of good work!
FIRST MARKER COMMENTS:
Your work would be improved if you had engaged with the supervision process more frequently and more effectively. There are a number of fundamental weaknesses in your work which we could have addressed. For example, your resaerch questions are too vague when considering the overall focus of your dissertation. As I think was mentioned at one of our very meetings! Each of the five RQ’s you mention could almost be developed into a dissertation on their own – you have little chance of answering them with any depth.
Similarly, your structure is not right. A dissertation is very diifferent from an essay, and you have effectively written an extended essay which still lacks coherence and focus.
You have not provided an abstarct!
Your lit review is really just a brief overview of some texts which touch upon one of the five RQ’s you have chosen. It is descriptive rather than analytical and does little to demonstrate its relevance or significance to this specific work – largely because I am not convinced you are clear about what that relevance or significane would look like because you are not clear about the overall focus required.
It is not clear how content analysis has anything to do with you being able to investigate your topic(s). You describe something about what ontent analysis is, but it is wholly innapropriate for your work – although I am still struggling to understand exactly what it was you were even trying to achieve.
Your work would be greatly improved if you paid attention to getting the basics of exactly what a dissertation is in place before writing anything down – ie have a focussed and clear resaerch goal (question) in mind and establish a credible way of investigating it (methodology) and then collect your data appropriately and devise the best way of presenting it (data anlysis) which in turn will allow you to comment effectively and answer your RQ.
Your work lacks coherence and focus. It is hard to follow and makes little sense in large parts. It is evident you have read some texts on resaerch methodology, but you have not applied them in any useable form to produce a dissertation which achieves the objective of investigating a question by using an appropriate research methodology to lead to a better understanding of the topic.
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